hmm... needs work
flow is okay at some points... but the rhymes... the rhymes are one syllable rhymes. You should try to rhyme with more than one syllable.
hmm... needs work
flow is okay at some points... but the rhymes... the rhymes are one syllable rhymes. You should try to rhyme with more than one syllable.
this is fire!
"pay for surgery, throw some D's on that bitch" That was a hilarious line right there. nice track j-kellz. Keep them coming.
Great lyrical work
The lyrics to this was awesome! My favorite verse was the 2nd one but all three were very well put together and perfect flow as always. Keep these hits coming j-kellz!
-Vinny B
this is fire!
goddamn! this is fricken awesome! Great chorus, i like the ah ah ah ah effect thrown in there. And the verses were badass! Something like this should definitely be on the radio!
pure fire!
This is an instant hit! great song!
really cool
If you made this into a short loop, i'm sure someone could use this in a flash game. But other than that sounds great.
damn son!
more chicks than charlie sheen!
superstar status!
nice track
I like how you made an entire verse in spanish like that. That was really cool. The beat is off the charts! Great work!
thx bro keep ya head up peace
sick song
i'm not a fan of getting high, but this is some sick track! great work!
this is sick!!!!
you gave this track some excellent lyrical work. great work dude!
They should make an Italian the manager, they know how to run shit!
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