nice track
The chorus is badass and the verses are fire. The beat is hot and overall the song is professional. great work!
nice track
The chorus is badass and the verses are fire. The beat is hot and overall the song is professional. great work!
thx man
instant hit
Something like this should be on the radio! for real! This is fire right here. Keep the hits coming please.
thx bro
very nice
a 1 minute 22 second rap song. This would be perfect for someone to animate. You showed perfect flow and creative lyrics. nicely done lejin.
I got some ideas that we can share. I'll Contact you later on tonight about it.
pure fire
First off... the beat itself would give all the girls instant orgasms. Then when you throw your verses on that.. girls would be having orgasms for days upon days. Very well put together track. Please make more and keep sending me links. :)
hmm... needs work
flow is okay at some points... but the rhymes... the rhymes are one syllable rhymes. You should try to rhyme with more than one syllable.
this is fire!
"pay for surgery, throw some D's on that bitch" That was a hilarious line right there. nice track j-kellz. Keep them coming.
Great lyrical work
The lyrics to this was awesome! My favorite verse was the 2nd one but all three were very well put together and perfect flow as always. Keep these hits coming j-kellz!
-Vinny B
really cool
If you made this into a short loop, i'm sure someone could use this in a flash game. But other than that sounds great.
They should make an Italian the manager, they know how to run shit!
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