YoinK's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Billy Zone: News]

okay, billy zone : news..

You should really turn up the volume of your voice... and clear it up a little too. I agree that paying for flash isn't worth it... You synched the voice well... but the resolution of your flash is way too big. Mask? nope never saw that. This reminds me of newgrounds news... but you really need to work on your audio.. don't use sound recorder that windows provides... you should use a different program and bring up the volume and clear it up.

Bphilow1 responds:

Whats newgrounds news?

[Link Strikes Back]

meh

yet another one of these animations that are of boring sprites... the music was good... text readings are boring... voice acting is much better to use.... gut anyway.. at least the music woke me up. This was a really short movie too.

roehrboc responds:

I personally like sprites so if you dont, you shouldn't watch the animation.
Im sorry, but dont have voice recording stuff on my computer and im not very serios about flash. SO you will have to live with text readings. Besides, it kindof blends with the Zelda theme.

[Finding Roots]

okay

The graphics seem very roughly sketched. The narration should have been louder in volume compared to the background sound fx and the background music. Background music with lyrics don't really mix with narration because it's difficult to understand because the two audio files overlap each other.. it's like having two people talking to you all at the same time... the dramatic music didn't really seem to fit in the begining... as for the part with the dog.. that part seemed really random.

MinuteMaidPremium responds:

well this is pretty much the first HELPFUL review, so you have a BIG penis!

[Stinkoman Vs Bob]

okay

A fight is always nice. I think you should have put some voice acting into this.. YOu had the right idea to have them talk before and during fighting though. Nice movie, some background drawings could have been a little bit more detailed. other than that, nice work.

DreamWhale responds:

thanks, u really made my day...i did try some voice acting with me and a cupple of friends, but our voices didnt seem right, thanks

[Feed the Macine]

okay

You do realize that due to the big file size, less people review your flash. Graphics were alright.. This is a creepy looking flash. Music was really good too. YOu should probably convert your mp3 to wav so that the file size would be much smaller. I really like this movie. The animation fits very well with this music. nice work.

jobelow responds:

thanks for the advice. i wasn't too sure if flash's compression would be any tighter than the original mp3, and i didn't want to risk the squeal of bad compression, but i'm gonna tone the vocals down a bit anyway, so i may very well do that.

[Dogs Vol.2]

very interesting

This is a very long movie. The graphics are just awesome. I liked the begining where it was made as if it were on a projector. Only problem with that scene was that it lagged the hell out of my computer.. but this has an interesting story. YOu have excellent drawing/animating skills. The narration in the begining could have been louder and clearer than it was. but very nice job.

Jszostak responds:

ya that scene is fairly graphic intense, thats why i put in a button to skip it.thanks for the compliment, glad you liked the movie

[Storys of legends trailer]

nice

Graphics look good and fit well with the music. shape tweens aren't the greatest looking... but lots of random people showing up on the screen facing off. I noticed that this is only a trailer so it is good. It kind of made me interested on seeing more. not bad.

secret-toad responds:

Thank you for the review

[Sprites Slugfest]

meh

They are just fighting without reason... voice acting would have been nice. Soundfx weren't at all that great... graphics would have been better if they were drawn instead also. This needs improvements.

Hotfoot-Wookie responds:

Sprites are sprites, I can't improve upon the art without me being at least half as lazy as I could be... Yeah, as if that'd happen! As you said, they weer fighting randomly, so the voice acting would have gone wo wast: "oh, I shall punch you" "Oh, that's fine charlie" You understand? Some of the sound was kind of out of place, ro not really all together. Thanks for the review.

[—]

okay

a clock movie with decent looking graphics... robot voices.. and some good music. It's nice to see a good clock movie once in awhile. But, it wasn't really all that funny. It was alright.

l1fty responds:

A'ight, thanks for the review, i enjoyed myself reading this ;)

~cheers,
l1fty