YoinK's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Blazin' with Pacman]

hmm it's decent

good idea for a pac-man movie. The characters could have had more detail than that. But great work with voice acting and great use of background music. The background could have had more detail as well. You have potential. Just keep working at it.

[r+m: the O.C.]

very neat

Very good narrating. The narrator had the perfect voice. Very cool style of characters. I like the black and white style. The FBF bunny rabbit character was funny. I like how this movie has controls like a youtube video. Volume adjuster and everything. Nice work!

[//Sacrafice.1]

It's okay

You should definitely consider buying flash. The Frame by frame of the eye looked neat but it seemed like this animation was lacking. I highly suggest you go and read up on some tutorials if you plan on making more flash. You chose a good dramatic background music type song.

Perriwinkle responds:

I did read up on all of the tutorials available, and i actually bought a book on flash animation. There is no courses on flash animation in my school, so everything will be basically self taught.

I will improve as time goes on. In reality, i do not plan on improving this flash, only adding to it. It would be nice to have a record of my progress as a flash author.

Thank you for the review.
//Perriwinkle

[HJZ 2]

very interesting

I thought the style of character was interesting. Great use of background music. Would be nicer if you made the music a little lower in volume. Great use of subtitles. The gun fight in the mall was awesome. Very fast paced and entertaining. Great work!

[:the Composer:]

That was excellent

Graphics were very well drawn from characters to backgrounds. Very great work in showing different perspectives. It was interesting to hear his family argue in the beginning and then he decided to move his piano outside. He got older and became successful and got even older and became less popular. Great work JAZZA!!!

[Extreme Skate]

I thought this was neat

Your preloader definitely needs to be fixed. But other than that, the song was a nice fit to a decent skateboarding animation. I liked how the skateboarder had to overcome some obstacles. You did a nice job of animating the body parts which most flash artists don't do. Nice work. Next time you make a flash, you should use the preloader that you can download in the portal. Also color would help make a flash like this look even better. nice work.

[5Min till the end.]

whoa

This movie started off slow.. but as it got going it got really really good. There were some very good fight scenes at the end. It looked like you got better as you kept drawing more. Great south park movie!

[Plug-a-butt]

This is okay

Great use of background music. Graphics could have been better. The point of plugging a but is not good because you'd probably destroy your kidneys. The kidneys would probably explode. I thought this movie needed more drawing. Much more detailed backgrounds would be nice. Perhaps a conversation of some kind would boost the attention of people.